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Saturday 14 October 2017

Boy on a swing - Oswald Mtshali

Slowly he moves
to and fro, to and fro,
then faster and faster
he swishes up and down.

His blue shirt
billows in the breeze like a tattered kite

The world whirls by:
east becomes west,
north turns to south;
the four cardinal points
meet in his head.

Mother! Where did I come from?
When will I wear long trousers?
Why was my father jailed?

Oswald Mtshali (born 1940) South Africa
Source: Advocate Olpet

36 comments:

  1. I find this poem so reflective of South African people's experiences in the then Apartheid policy.

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    1. Yes Iike it

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    2. After 8 years since I graduated from high school I still can’t forget about the poem it brings me lot of memories about friends much especially my literature teacher Mr Cummings

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  2. This poem just brought alot of memory

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  3. I was taught this poem 10years ago

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  4. The last three questions in the last stanza is very emotional and heart touching.

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  5. I will never forget this poem.

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  6. I just had to look for this poem again....I learnt this poem 7 years ago and yet still very vivid in mind. Hmm...great poem

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  7. This poem is emotional and at thesame time the most loved among the poems I've read.
    The last stanza is very touching.

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  8. Thank you for your comment. I am so sorry that you feel unable to forgive the white people. There is no doubt that the injustice done to black people in South Africa (and other African states) was wrong. But forgiveness is the pathway to healing on both sides, I believe. If you can't forgive, then you can't be healed either.

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  9. This poem is touching especially the last stanza

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  10. Enter your comment..."To and Fro, To and Fro" the story of our world. Osward, the man who fought with pen.

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  11. My number 1 poem along with "ambassadors of poverty"

    It now refers to our so called leaders
    North South East and West now samething
    They are full of same wicked behavior but in different methods
    I like the boy he quickly realize what life is before it's too late

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    1. Ambassadors of Poverty is the best bro, then Homeless Not Hopeless

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    2. I love anonymous and synonyms

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  12. Those rhetorical question so of the last stanza it's what makes me love the whole poem

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  13. This poem does not speak to our leaders or the political elite but its also portrait the suffering children staying with people just to have shelter and wish to be an important person tomorrow.

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  14. Akor blessing nedy18 December 2021 at 22:22

    This is so emotional and I think my country is still a victim of this poem ,Biafra struggle

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  15. I was thought this poem during my college ten years ago,
    The poem speaks of a greater volume, certainly in regret and pain, the only desire we've as kids, we've never gotten and yet none has been able to provide those three answers till date.
    It's so painful though, that even time has found it difficult to heal.

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  16. I read this poem in my ss1 and I still enjoy reading it.

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  17. Going by this poem, i still hate the African leaders.

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  18. This reminds me of 1013 I miss this stage
    God bless my literature teachers

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  19. One of the best I read back in my childhood ❤️ also the fence, homeless not hopeless, ambassador of poverty..God bless

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  20. I will never forget this poem,I was though this poem 13 years ago

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  21. This very important

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  22. Hello "Anonymous" - yes, by all means you can give me a poem, though I can't promise to, post it here. Just post the link to it in your reply.

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  23. The poem is very good 💯 and Emotional 😭

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  24. Where are the background of the poem

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  25. After 8 years I still read it

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  26. This poems reminds me of my high school days. My literature teacher Mr. Agboola loved the hell out of it. Dawn days.

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  27. I love this picture poem so much

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